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Brick By Brick (The Stalker Song)

It was like a dream,
I couldn't have stopped it
if I'd wanted to...


(brick by brick)


You see I've always believed
that I could do anything
that I wanted to...


(brick by brick)

 

You never know

I could be watchin' you now...

 

(brick by brick)

 

thirty-five dark feet

from your house.

 

(countin' brick by brick)

 

(chorus)

Run,run,run,

better run, baby, run

theres a madman comin'

with a loaded gun/p>

 

Pray,pray, pray,

better pray, baby, pray

'cause you  wont get

a lawyer come judgement day.

 

Don't bother callin'

cause I broke the phone.

 

(brick by brick)

 

So now your talkin'

to your self alone.

 

(brick by brick)

 

I build you up

just to tear you down.

 

(brick by brick)

 

And when the sun comes up

you'll be the talk of the town

 

(brick by brick)

 

It was like a dream

I couldn't have stopped it

if I'd wanted to....

 

 

 

 

Author notes

This song was actually written by venomous toad and RockStar76

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  • cc
    October 2
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    OOO gives a chill to think of the type of person who can watch and lay in wait.


  • toomysterious
    October 2
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    In the chorus is the mad man coming with a loaded gun or grudge??


    • venomoustoad
      October 3
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      I answered that in a message but the answer is that I wrote that chorus as a separate piece that seemed to fit in this song. John changed it to grudge and if anybody thinks I'm right about this I urge you to send a message to RockStar76. He needs to u

      • venomoustoad
        October 3
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        nderstand who is Paul Simon and who is Art Garfunkle in this collaboration.

        answered that in a message but the answer is that I wrote that chorus as a separate piece that seemed to fit in this song. John changed it to grudge and if anybody thinks I'm right about this I urge you to send a message to RockStar76. He needs to u


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  • toomysterious
    October 2

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    I can feel the staggered rhythm in this poem, perfect for a stalker and my mind is going crazy with all the possibilities. You left it wide open to interpretation and I love that. Congratulations to both of you. Great collaboration. Makes me want to read some more.


  • glenn shannon silver member
    October 1
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    some thing glitched on your page so 3 clappies from me cuz


  • glenn shannon silver member
    October 1
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    i very much enjoyed this song well done to both of you cool write

  • glenn shannon silver member
    October 1
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    damn fine bit of lyric by both of you very much enjoyed it i actually wanted it to go longer but im greedy lol very cool cuz

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