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Ash

I  looked into your eyes today.
They were silver with a hint of gold
They conveyed a bigger story than I never expected.
Telling me to behold what isn't there.

I touched the ocean like you said.
"One finger first, then the whole hand."
It bled blue and red.
I touched the wind, and like you said
"Always with feeling, never with touch."
I was cold.

I thought much about the way you touched my soul.
You listened, never judged.
You're eyes look like coal.
You smudged me with your hate.
You listened, I followed.

I'm cold.
I can't swallow.
You molded me into this sculpture!
You made me hate?

Why?

It is too old to complete...

You threw me away
like you throw trash.
I won't be here today

You make me into ash.

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  • Shifting
    October 1

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    i really like this! wow, the ending is accusatory, but beautiful and it rhymes well occasionally.