i dontt know what the fxck im sittin here for. i qot too muchhh shxt on the brain. & drama to carry alonq w| it. i do what i can & try to carry outt the best. but lately even im failin at that. im lucky if i even qet hiqh once daily. Cuz...Gods tellin mee, my lifes bout to chanqe & i know i wontt beable to handle it.
i Look in the mirror like every 5 seconds, & repeatin it like i do is cuz sometimes i dont reconize who im lookin at. My worlds been turned up^side down & myy lifes been twisted around. im just like any otherr female screw up from a fxcked up town, In this world. tryin to live solo, til somone sees throuqh myy youth.
its been weeks since i wrote my last ryme OR even made a freakin dime. Bitchhes sayy ALL the time, they think they're {{{ BAD))), but they dont know shxt bout livin the life. & there aintt no one better to ask then me. Cuz ive lived in hell & struggled myy way back. So when bitchhes qive me a wronq look. They better do some researchh cuz i aint settlin for no ones bullcrap.
& there aint NO limit to what i could do !
Runnin out of a burnin house that i set off myself. i could either run out & say fxck you. OR qet there before the fire department do. Grab you & see how funny it'd be to see a person die while rollin around burnt trynna qet outt. haha!
There aint NO limit to what i could do.
There aint NO limit to how far you could push me.
i dont wanna hurt you, you see. i'd really like to ---> \\L♥VE// <--- you. but these *>WHORES<* outt on the streets make it sooo hard for a woman like me.
YOU cross the line ? You deal w| me.
Dont fool yourself, you wanna see the real me ?.
Shut the fxck up. i dont need an excuse to bash your head into that wall. this is who i am. This is what i do. This is the real me. Take it OR leave it. Dont like it, thats fine. but mess w| me, next week....your body will end up in the sewer.
There aint NO limit to what i Could do.
There aint NO limit to what i Could do.
There aint NO limit to how far you could push me.
There aint NO limit to where life could take me.
There aint NO limit to what i Could do.
Author notes
Its a RAP ! i qot the idea from Eminem . & wrote about MY life .
i didnt even kno ihad that kinda stuff in me.
Cuz iwrote this one nite after iqot in a fiqht w| this qirl .
So ihope yu quys lyk it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[♥] !
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This poem shows just how much you are you. Very real in every aspect of the word. I like how you made it clear that you will always be yourself. Better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you are not. Give a nice fuck you to all of the haters. I will keep my grammer comments to myslef because I'm sure you know, and I'm sure you don't really care. So my honest opinion would be I love it and keep being you
~Serenity
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so if you can rap you can tap
and you walk the walk and talk the talk..........well done -
I like it, but I think it would be better if you remove the "x" from words such as (this came straight from your lyrics) fxck and shxt. Make it "fuck" and "shit". It makes it seem like you're not afraid to cuss. I do that in my poems and lyrics; no one cares actually.
I also saw a bunch of mistakes. (Did you want it like that?
) I barely understood it until I spent like....five minutes looking over it. The "i"s should be capitalized ~basic English grammar~. The w| should be "with".
This one is personal to me (quite idiotic actually). "Bullcrap" could be "bullshit". (Like I said, completely idiotic.
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Other than all that stuff, it was good. I love Eminem.
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Dax♥~*•
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iWrote "Bullcrap" cuz it rymed !!!!!!! . & for tha spellinq , idid tht , cuz ilike it betta tht wayy !!!!!!!!!! & im tryin to cut down on the cussin in my sonqs , so thas why ialso wrote " BUllCRAP" . !!!! . [ Not all my sonqs are written this wayy, ichose to write my sonqs different ways & how they're spelled !!!!! )
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Ok! I didn't know! Ain't gotta go all out on me...
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cool beans
i was homless and slaming heroin and had nothing and now i have my own place and im working getting into school i startd with nothing and im working my way up and i fuckd up any one who stops me and i am who i am and you think and say the saythings i do an i realy love it your words are beutiful your the only girl i i can relate to i wish we knew each other in person
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Yea , well im struqqlinq w| addiction as well . & it is hard ! lol bt ijuss qot mad one niqht & wrote the whole thinq in under a half hour . Theres alotta fake ppl out there & iwanted to prove iwasnt one of them . & ithink/hope this rap proves it !
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