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Cascade



  Chills run through my soul as
        rivulets of tears wash over my eyes

Cleansing fervent memories which bind us closer

      Tiptoe after sunset;
            in translucent happiness


  Awaiting our dawn; our new tomorrow; our everything



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Prompt: Water

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  • Kathraina silver member
    October 1

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    i love this piece, especially the thoughts in the last line. well done


  • ifonlyyouknew
    October 1
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    ok so u r enterd... I LOVE IT!!!! good job =]