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Decision: Manhattan

Regretful choices mean chances
not taken
Being at one time so stirred
and so shaken
Awareness of all that's lost
now awakens
Weak white wine missed the Mark, I was
very mistaken

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  • individuality gold member
    October 11, 2009

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    a good poem, i started to think of james bond whilst reading this lol shaken not stirred and then you briought wine into the equation. i will have some of that with my whiskey please.