Silence drifts in a sea of Angel's tears.
Author notes
Prompt:
“My Life is my Message.”
...Mahatma Gandhi...
What would YOU Send in this bottle...
in 33 LETTERS or LESS? [not Words]
(used 32)
A contest entry
- *~ My Message in a Bottle ~* by Desire.
1221 points, ended October 12, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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You really have such a beautiful heart, filled with loving, poetic thoughts that capture the heart of me, and all who read I'm sure. Thanks for sharing, and needless to say, I love what you inscribed..
Love ya sis,
Bro Timothy
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Thank You!
Thank You for Your entry: Waves in a Sea of Unknown
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and after reading several times ~
I'm Honored also Humbled You took the time to pen for my contest
You took the prompt and brought forth much for the Mind to feast upon~
Bravo!! When I digest words written, images come through that grab hard~
Woven Strengths: Wow~ while reading I kept being shown a Heart in palm
now with this image....I have seen before with a quote which is on the tip
of my tongue~~ this Heart is like a tiny Gem...value Priceless as if handed
to another person~ but there is silence...I don't hear the crickets chirp...it is like this uncomfortable passing of time...waiting for an answer...
I'm seeing reference to other person...soaring into skies as if like an Eagle...
eyeing for prey~ Very strange image but that is what I was given
After reading again~ I am shown the scene in City of Angels where the
Angel becomes Human and the Woman he has fallen in Love with...
they share a Sacred exchange....but then she is killed on her bike...
that moment...Emotions at that moment captured...I am shown
here The feeling of loss ...the feeling of emptiness~
I'm shown the Angel->Human walking towards the waves as they
come in and continues to walk
However that is to be Interpreted.
You give the Reader much to think about
Love the direction You took with this prompt
Hopefully my comment to Your write makes sense
Powerful verse and message You have brought forth
Vivid Imagery poured~...
Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Voice
also best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
Many blessings too 
with much love and light~ Desire~*~
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Hmmmm, what a wonderful read this one is sis!!! I know where it comes from, and the feelings of which you speak. You did a great job with this one! I love it!!
Best of luck to you in this contest!
and love
Nyetta
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