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Better Believer

1st verse:

Life is seen more clearly through our tears,
Because we all find some faith when we face our fears,
When my life's going like I want god
Becomes an afterthought.
And I start trying to build my heaven here.

Chorus:

A better believer would look to the skies,
Shout hallelujuah with tears in his eyes,
Open his heart and give it all away,
when I take a hard look at myself,
And count my blessings,
I can't but help
But wonder if there's a mistake,
This life of mine should belong to a better believer.

2nd verse:

All we really need in life is love,
And in my time,
I've had more than enough,
But some days I'm not satisfied,
It happens to me every time,
I look around,
Instead of looking up.

Repat chorus:

A better believer would look to the skies,
Shout hallelujuah with tears in his eyes,
Open his heart and give it all away,
When I take a good look at myself,
And count my blessings,
I can't help but help,
But wonder if there's been a mistake,
This life of mine should belong to a better believer.

Repat verse:

All we really need is love,
And in my time,
I've had more than enough,
But some days I'm not satisfied,
It happens to me every time,
I look around,
Instead of looking up.

Short Final verse:

With all I've got,
I should be thankful for,
I should be,
Doing so much more than I know.

Final Chorus:

A better believer would look to the skies,
And shout hallelujuah with tears in his eyes,
Open his heart and start giving it all away,
When I take a really hard,
Look at myself,
And count my blessings I can't but help,
But wonder if there's been,
Some kind of mistake,
This life omine should belongbelong to a better believer.

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Comments

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  • wow. This is amazing. It had great rhyme and rhythm. Normally I can't sit down and read lyrics but you kept my attention. It gave me alot to think about. Thankyou for entering and best of luck

    peace


  • Inakanu
    October 2

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    this is really good i love it it really does give everyone something to think of and is so true about many things

  • Honey we all do s this was amazing though. I loved it . It is a really great poem honey know I am here for you if you need to talk okay


  • Night Rose
    October 1

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    Daughter of night

    oh my gosh i love it brother good right you always keep my attention in your righting love it keep on writhing good poems

  • Wow twinny, this is very beautiful. I aboustely love it!

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