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Cracking Codes

Missing image

 

 

Perceive deception's amusement, lose it!

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(33 Letters)
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A contest entry

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  • Desire gold member
    October 10

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    Thank You!

    Thank You for Your entry: Cracking Codes
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and after reading several times ~
    I'm Honored also Humbled You took the time to pen for my contest
    You took the prompt and brought forth much for the Mind to feast upon~
    Bravo!! When I digest words written, images come through that grab hard~
    Woven Strengths: Wow~ while reading I kept being shown a piece of paper
    floating atop liquid appears as if on the open seas~ free floating
    For some reason am shown a kite flying in the skies
    I am shown also clouds...how they appear one way...
    a provocative shape~ seeing a child pointing and guessing what is...
    and then it shape shifts
    However that is to be Interpreted.
    You give the Reader much to think about
    Love the direction You took with this prompt
    Hopefully my comment to Your write makes sense
    Powerful verse and message You have brought forth
    Vivid Imagery poured~...

    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Voice
    also best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Many blessings too
    with much love and light~ Desire~*~


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 8

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    Now this is clever
    I love the way this line gave the edge of bite and sunk into my mind
    offering thoughts ..
    best wishes and good luck to you
    Julie