I am not an answer
Just an unrequited question
Seeking for resolution
To the questions we all ask
So hear me out and ponder
The truth I’ve come to know
And share with me your insight
So that I can better grow
Though I’m dedicated to the search
For a consolidative theory
That explains just how it is
That life’s both splendiferous and dreary
at the end of every day
it simply seems to me
Love is the only constant
All else but mystery
Please tell me what you think
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A wonderful write .
Loved it.
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Love it!!
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Nice work on this Pam! I especially enjoyed the ending on this. BRILLIANT!
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ohhh you are something gypsy......
and you are so right....
everything is a mystery ..except love...
why do others find it so mysteriouse...
it's easy ....just let your heart go...
it's so easy....
at the end of every day
it simply seems to me
Love is the only constant
All else but mystery
im beside myself here...
I know your work well...
so beautiful it all is...
but something took you here,...
a higher realization....
its not complicated.....
just fall into someone and learn how high they can take you,
if you dont get dizzy.. fall for someone who will take you even higher..
till you grow so high your heart will fly away
So hear me out and ponder
The truth I’ve come to know
And share with me your insight
So that I can better grow
I love how you write gypsy...
it's so pure...so real.......
you have such a beautiful soul lass...
Bless you always
Liam
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I think this is excellent and completely true in every way. It's one of the best poems I've read in a while. Thank you for writing it! It was a treat, and it made me think.
Vhoori
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love is constant,,,, but often distorts other perceptions,,lovely poem pam x
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your write is so beautifully penned,
To love takes courage and strength
as we go through life, and at times
I am just coward, but gain my strength
through my faith..
with love and blessings
Rend
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Thank you! I'm a coward too sometimes...but being brave doesn't mean being unafraid...it means doing what you have to in spite of the fear. Blessings!
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This was really good. I really enjoyed this. It was hard too pick out my favorite part but hey I did it!
Anyways! This was good. Keep up the good work. -
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Thank you for your comment!
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In the beginning was love...
and no matter how we strive to find alternative theories
that will explain the reason we are alive...
nothing will ever satisfy
that which is true
for in the end we shall find
that every road we have ever walked
searching for that which we instinctively knew...
will lead us back to love
How wonderful to see you again dear friend
with your tender heart
always echoing words, well thought out
and so graciousely penned...
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Thank you J-J...I always appreciate your comments!
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LOVE
This is how you know and grow
love has so many roots, takes us on so many paths
the mystery, trying to fit each piece in its proper place
when you let go of all other views and look within you, you find this essence that helps you put the puzzle together with greater ease
and the puzzle it expands the closer you get to the finish...
I truly understand this
precious write
God bless you my friend...
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Thank you sweet soulful friend! It doesn't surprise me at all that you understand this write! Blessings! Pam
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