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bandaid



Left finger
      where the ring use to be
      Flesh toned
      Only the edges revealed
Like life




Author notes

On the bus. Saw a left ring finger bandaid. Doesn't fix everything I guess.

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  • naena
    October 7

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    On a personal note, I'm amazed that you packed so much power in to so few words. Keen observation and analogy. Well done! On a technical note, I believe that "use" should be "used".


  • donnz
    October 1
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    excellent observation

    you always seem to see things most of us miss
    & turn it into an insightful 'AHA experience.
    Loved it.