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Why?????

Prejudice,it's all around us,
in ourselves,in our neighbors,
even in our past,present,and
future
there's no stopping it
we're going to believe and
judge what we want
"He's black,she's white,she's too old,
he's too young,boys are gross,girls are
gross,she's too fat,she's too skinny,
he looks weird,he believes in God,she
believes in Buddaha."
We're going to dislike one of
these people,even if we have
a real reason.

We judge by alot of different
ways:racial,culture,sexist,
difference,age,ect.
Why do we?
Is it just in our nature?
Is it the way our parents raised
us,
or are we just jealous and want
them to feel worse than we feel?
We all know it's wrong but we do
it anyways....
      WHY???

I did this for english...What do you think???????

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  • LifeEndsNow
    November 6

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    We are prejudice by nature because we are rooted in it by the news, t.v shows everything. We judge overs for what they believe, who they are and ect. because we can't grasp that we are different yet we are the same. i liked your poem keep up the great work

    -Kevin

  • Such a true poem filled with so many questions that will never be answered--very good write

  • That's what I've been asking for a long time now...why? Why treat someone a bad way because they think differently than someone else? And then they keep up with bad treatment until it kills you on the inside. But it's a good write Akiza. Sehr gut!


  • VooDoo Child
    October 1
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    I like it alot!!!!