in the gap
between each house--
a full moon
Andrew Hide
8~04~2004
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Written April 8th, 2004
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Aww Andrew this is exquisite.
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Hi Andrew,
very origional, a great write. With quite alot of imagery in so few words well done. Thx for sharing.
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This was original, gave me a new thought on writing on haiku.
I'll try to ponder on this one, I might just be enlightened. -
Great poem.
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Nice that once one points youon it becomes so vissible seen many many times but never been so attendet to it.
That's realy the power of haiku -
very good
Excellent. In such a small space you have captured the wonder of the night sky.
A really good haiku.
thanks,
John -
Excellent
Hi Andrew:
This is a very good Haiku. Driving at night, that is the way it seems. Thanks for another of your splendid Haikus. Bill -
Ok you have really been diggin on this last full moon haven't you. Very contemplative of the night sky these days.... Well we are rewarded with some lovely haiku as a result. Thanks, susan
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Great Haiku Andrew. We just had a wonderful full bright moon a few nights ago and this reminded me how mysterious and enlighting it can be.
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