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Kodachrome

Twisted essence of life and death
the fate we walk, with destiny's step
each other breathing upon the road
through the tunnel, to the hole


While mysticism shares

last drinks
between black and white
on the table of grey
spilling their thoughts

....... gratitude cast

 

 

 

 

 





 

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  • spideracer gold member
    October 4

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    In such few words you've painted here a picture of life as it rushes towards that final curtain call, a poem that holds a lot of meaning within for those who care to venture further into the ''Kodachrome'', the black and white of a simple life. Quite thought provoking in its own little way.