autumn morning
low clouds ride brisk winds
all is motion
proud birch and maple scatter
colored leaves like blessings fly
Author notes
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this is a work in progress, constructive critism welcomed
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Beautiful
Does the in need to be there? Also, does the maple need it's own adjective?
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i am not good at writting this type of poetry,
but not to say that i do not appreciate it for its
value, because this one in particular is stunning,
beautiful penning
love & blessings
Rend
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thank you for your kind words, they are very much appreciated, my humble thanks
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wow
love this write, and the background/border makes it really come alive! beautiful stuff here my friend..
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ah you make me smile
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Beautiful!
Great use of imagery. Just exquisite. Tankas, haikus and lanterns offer a huge challenge to make something substantial out of so little, and you seem to do that very well.
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hmmm
think my addeled mind handles less beter then mpre, glad you liked
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Beautiful, I could see and feel everything it was magical. You have a lot of talent with haiku's, great write and the picture was perfect for it
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my humble thanks
I am trying to put ten tankas together for a publication, my stomach is in a knot thanks you for your kind words
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excellent~
Beautiful
I love this............
I haven't done a Tanka forever....
Best of luck in the contest
It's a winner in my book
And Ky has had brisk winds for 2 days now up to 45 mph and chilly
Hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~
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thank you sweet sister
no contest, fancying up ten tanka's to submit for publication to the American Tanka Society. Much more scary..... will have to get a big folder for rejection slips. LOL
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