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deaths coming

death will come quickly
born on silent, shadowed wings
let me feel no pain

what emotions does this inspire within you?

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  • xxuglyducklingxx
    October 13

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    O.O!!!

    Not much you can really say after that. It's one of those "..Nuff said" moments. Other than that I am surprised at how in tune you kept the image to the hidden frequencies of that metaphor. I think you did a very nice job on this piece. I loved it. ! Keep up the great work. !