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as autumn comes

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Let us pick the fruit from ripened vines

And sing our weary songs from earth to sky;

let's never question dear old life as death sweeps

merrily along this autumn morn.

Let's not mourn a moment more

the passing of each elm leaf

which withers in this cancer riddled

change in weather, which now turns

a lovely pale and softly sails toward the end.

Yes, the witching season is upon us

our youthful ghosts that haunt us

pass along the barren asphalt street

where now the bodies of the summer leaves

begin to rot like all of we who witnessed

one too many cheery, jolly days before the fire.

Yes, we shall expire... but unlike trees

and flowers we shall never bloom again.

Our foliage shall not cover once again

our bloated boughs, our shrunken trunks,

our planted roots which can no longer hold us up.

Our dreams have stopped their  dreaming,

the schemes we schemed

no longer scheming, screaming

from the tortured, sparrow's quill...

it'll scratch no more that simple writing on the wall.

A winter's night, eternal night will surely claim us all.

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Propt # 1: Autumn 

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Pic: http://georgemacumming.com/__oneclick_uploads/2007/11/autumn1image.jpg

 

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  • Miss Macabre
    October 9

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    Very beautiful and eerie. This poem speaks to me of a combination of autumn and of time, time destroying and withering away at us every season, but we are not the earth and seasons and we cannot renew ourselves. My favorite bit:

    [Our dreams have stopped their dreaming,
    the schemes we schemed
    no longer scheming, screaming]

    Flawless flow, thank you for entering and best of luck.


    • rrw gold member
      October 10
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      Thanks, M & M, and yeah. I always seem to be talking about getting old in my seasonal poems.., and the coming death of winter. And nauuture (so far) will always bloom again... we humans surely will not. Thanks for the Bronz!