I can still see
Deep into the distance
But I need assistence
To read the
Handwriting
On the wall...
A contest entry
- end of days by halfpast4ever.
1000 points, ended October 2, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Myopia - actual and metaphorical - is so easy to hide from others, but not from oneself. A pithy little piece - great stuff.
Mike
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I like this alot. I appreciate alot said in brevity. I like the metaphor. As my age increases, my sight gets worse. It was very well done. In the words of Calvin Coolidge..... Talk less, say more.
Mike
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you and me both brother.
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this was good. im not to keen on the shortness of it but it was really good. thankyou.
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