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The Woman I Love!

She is cute, She is like a butterfly,
She don’t speak too much, ‘cause she is shy!

She thinks that no one can ever love her,
So she never believed how much I Love her,

She laughs so cute, like summer sun shines,
She intoxicate you like a glass of wine,

She is good, She is sane,
She is a woman who don’t deserve pain,

No matter what comes she will be fine,
‘Cause I am hers and she is mine

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nothing just an attempt to impress her

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  • I agree with Mango. It was very cute. Good job on the rhyming. Well done, I hope she likes it.


  • Mango Memories gold member
    October 1
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    Aww... shes lucky. And this is cute ^^


    • harjeet
      October 1
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      thanks

      that was quick. thanks for the support. I hope she will like it too