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Opus in the Key of Love Major

A Dedication to: Andre ben-YEHU











Play me
      hear my symphony..................................... reverberate, shiver

With resin strike your bow
      watch me quiver........................................harmony aglow

Oceanic swells and curls
      hallow wave of mellow sublimity.....................unfurls.





                                                who and what
                                      may tap the enrapt fountain
                                              of ecstatic bliss?

                                          strikes the heretofore
                                  missed, unheard majestic fiords;
                          unbinds nectarian truths with unsung chords?

                                  recognizes with glorious discernment
                            unharnesses  euphoric euphonics of timpani
                          plucks eternity's awareness with tender finesse?

                                  'tis such colossal Rhapsodic Melody
                            underscored with transcendental Veracity;
                                    sacred scriptural texts proclaim

                                         
this Holy Child of God.............
                                                    IS named

Love's
      One Eternal Soul Flame.....................................




Author notes

Dedicated to: Andre ben-YEHU
Master, Teacher, Friend
with gratitude and respect
shalom. shalom. shalom.

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  • drifting cloud silver member
    October 3

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    Refreshing form used here. A feeling of awe is portrayed and mind opening questions - who or what? Unsung chords - just waiting to be tapped into. And ending marvelously with the warmth of connection to God. I enjoyed reading this.