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Finding me in you!

"It is me" you whispered.
I did not listen.
I turned away and faced
time alone that was fruitless.

You tipped my chin up
for I looked only down.
Down at my broken heart
down at my broken body.

When I looked up at last
you were there,
a smile on your lips
a twinkle of promise in your eye.

My heart fluttered in disbelief
fear from past hurts,
anxiety of the unknown,
faltering of the mind.

Slowly I took your hand
followed you forward.
Learning to trust,
trusting to smile.

Finally finding my heart...
                                    in you!

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Another tribute to my belovèd Vic.

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Comments

  • awwwwwh!! so cute and so romantic!!
    i really like it! and well done for finding that someone special ^^