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Favorite Bro

Even though he`s fifty-five
He`s still my little Brother
How can we keep him alive
Without help from our Mother

The Doctor says it`s cancer
Protecting him is my job
This will be the last dance, Sir
What can I do ! Oh my God !

Could this be a test of faith?
Quick call to nine-eleven
On disease call down a raid
Angels waiting in heaven

On my knees; I truly pray
Answer please, what will God say?

Author notes

Because my lines are but seven syllables but number fourteen;
I would call this work a skinny sonnet.
Update: The results of a biopsy indicate that my Brother has
but one or two years left to live. Please pray for Tom`s recovey...Bob 42

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  • csmmoms2
    October 1
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    Good luck dear sonnet poet. -c

    • Bob 42 silver member
      October 2
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      csimmons2

      All I can say is thank you c
      Your friendship means alot to me