People sang,
sifting
through hymns
from books
older than I.
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prompt is ... Church yard ... (10 words)
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Great work! 55 isn't that old...LOL
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I love that you brought the elemement of music through (ofcourse i did) and the final words 'older than I ' are very carefully and profoundly chosen. Beautifuly crafted simplicity here, which make this work in no way simple but rather very refined
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so divinely portrayed.. x
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This gives a big impression with a few words. Makes me think of the history and beauty one might find in a church.
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nice take
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