Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

stutter

close your eyes and float in a dream
open your eyes to see and be seen
judge and be judged, and hate those that do
free your heart of hate, look inside these anew
redirect an assumption to stop and hear
listen with your mind to all those who're dear
meet new people, cherish who you meet
discover a wonder and walk in his feet

the nonsensical deliriums are that of the mad
yet nothing like repetition can make me so sad
the stutter stays on inconvenient trifles
forcing us to pause...

A contest entry

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • wildflower. gold member
    October 1, 2009
    Edit | Reply
    wow, excellent take on the prompt!