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Intertwining Love

When we met our paths were crossed
You made my words jumble, my life seemed off
Your everyword makes my heart skip a beat
Our love is something I will always keep

Our Worlds divide
Your pull and my hands collide
When I'm in your arms it feels like a dream
You and me seeem so serene

I can't Imagine my life without you
Every second i want to say "I love you"
This feelin so earth binding
This love forever, intertwining

Author notes

this is my attempt of an ode
im not really good with rhyming
i hope its good^.^
this is writen for this guy i am completely in love with
although im not good with telling him
i tried coming close to describing how i feel

have u felt like this b4?

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  • Myth Of Twilight
    October 10

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    so you belong to Zero right your the one he has been talking about is this to him or some one else just to ask hay you know you should write more your not to bad need a bit of work on writeing with emotion still i think you should put more though into your work but you write of love not to bad keep it up keep it flowing

    ~White Angel Kigi~