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Love

Love is a thing that people die for
You have my heart locked in a unknown door
The one thing of beauty you can't control
let your feelings flow, only lies take their toll
Don't let true love only be lore

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this is a lymmeric, i wrote for my english class
my first one, idk if its good >.<

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  • I love how you capture so much in such few lines.
    good luck in your english class


  • luna-midnight gold member
    September 30
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    it seems good to me, i like it
    good luck in the class, and keep writing
    Stephanie ♥