Your masquerade of games
is prayed upon under the loose sheets
that surrounds our young bodies
full of dangerous curiosity.
As I slip my fingers across
my fantasy--- you come to life
pulling me under your canopy
of fireworks
My heart is lost among the
occupied fruit feilds beyond our window
as your mystery gives me inner strength
and freedom as we are eachothers
equal contenders
We treat eachother
like love's greatest promise
is held between the lost lust
of the creativity and the art
of our bodies
The movement of each abandoned limb
from duty's order
grabes the muscles with in me
pulling them to your secret desires
Cradled in your arms of bronzed pleasure
you sheild me from the pain within these bricks
as your crouching back acts as a wall
for my defense
As prejudice and elegance
is seeped and knitted on every lady's bone
are rebellious attributes break us free
as we swing into one another
over the night's embrace
and under the stars forgivness
I wish to never know your true face
as you must never see mine
for we mold under this mask of glitters
into the most perfect astrological story
waiting for our minds to fill in the tantric pages
with each embrace
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very sexy poem
this was brilliant as usual, very sensual and descriptive, i like the line where his back is described as a wall, and the one where the bodies are like works of creative art as well. very well done. I will now go and ice my crotch because i am at work. nobody wants to SEE how much i like this poem.I think they would much rather hear how much i like it. :] -
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haha martellis your too funny heehee glad u like it!!!!
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interesting
nice story, i like all the mythical references. nicly woven in. well done.
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Now this is like what I wanted to go for with my poem, but nothing I was coming up with sounded anywhere near as beautiful as this! Every word you wrote is sheer elegance shining from the page. I'll be surprised if this one doesn't get gold!
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awww thankyou sissy!!!! heehee
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omg, yeah. wow, now, i really feel like mines bad. cuz, uh ^wow^ ?
geez...
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thanksyou!!!!!
good luck to u too!!!
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good luckkk
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thanku
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