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Brightness

Sunlight streams through the blinds
that are over the eyes of a million people
But you refuse to see the truth

The truth is hiding in plain sight
even no one realizes it and no one
even knows it anymore

Ink is covering everyone
on their faces and their hands
they don't know how to stop

you ask questions
of things with no answer
and the answer is given

sense is a long lost item
everyone seems to have transformed
into small animals

rats float through air
humans run on the dirt
the dirt crumbles

discrepancies
cover everything within sight
and everyone

do you know anymore
or have you forgotten the answer
does anyone the truth?

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  • ixtli
    September 30
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    I definitely enjoy the symbolism in this. Plenty of interesting metaphors. Muy bien, mi amigo.