Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

iced





i am a chip
no, a sliver
once  a solid cube
with a crush


and then  she proclaimed me

cold

  so it is

  thick bloke
that  can not melt
eventually

we avoid  the thin edges
  it all breaks apart anyway
until we are submerged
unable to make our  way

to solid ground

















    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    September 30

    Edit | Reply
    another awesome write my friend i love it....nothing else to add to that