Construction of even these
Simple and irrelevant words
A chore bordering on impossible
Forced and meaningless from afar
Unconnected phrases when deconstructed
Yet a feat worthy of praise.
Author notes
depicting the struggle to write despite lacking the motivation and inspiration necessary to create anything beautiful
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I took your time, now let me have your thoughts....
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Oh wow. You did an amazing job with this. The time was well spent and I believe this is perfect just the way it is. I wouldn't change a thing about it. You did great!
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thanks
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i like your title catchy and the words are constructed quite well together dear and each reader can take it were they will and thats good well done as always
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Very well said for the point you are trying to get across. Great word usage and very well penned.
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Very short, but well put.
Good luck -
I'm probably getting this all wrong, but words are open to interpretation, therefore there is no right or wrong. And that itself is a lie.
I like this - the poem structurally/diction depicts the meaning of the poem to some degree. Sometimes it takes a while to get a 'good' poem/piece or writing produced. However, whatever is produced is produced and not all people can get nonsense into a piece of art.
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thanks, its supposed to be a bit stilted and it goes with the prompt which was "overcoming" that may help give a direction of exactly what i was aiming at
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