And every time I feel my phone vibrate,
I jump out of my skin
because I'm hoping that the person texting me is him.
<3
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I found this on my laptop, which we just got the charger for! (I haven't used my laptop in months)
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That's sweet.
If I was you, I would add about a dozen 'enters' under the poem, because, being so short, when I went to read it, the screen was taken up mostly by the stuff underneath the poem, which is quite distracting. The last line of the poem, by the way, has awesome meter. It flows off the tongue to read out loud. The accent is on every other syllable - exactly.
Please write more.
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I fixed it and yeah, that's what I thought when I saw this on my laptop. It's short, but has a lot of meaning behind it and the last lines are perfect together. Thank you, I'm trying really hard to write a lot of poems, but I am kind of suffering from writer's block. For months, I sat in my room, staring blankly at a piece of paper, so I am trying to get out more and experience all kinds of things, so I can write about it. I'm trying really hard!
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