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ipê






ipê-
entre os galhos
flores ou borboletas?





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JFTJOI

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  • ShaShay
    November 6
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    I like the feel of this (after seeing the translation) You are very talented.
    Sharon

  • Yemassee gold member
    October 8

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    Babelfish translation:

    ipê- between the twigs
    flowers or butterflies?

    Sadly the first word didn't translate. But I think I get it, it's a question as to whether it's a twig or a butterfly in the bush, sort of disguised like some bugs and animals do.

    I can't help but notice every haiku you entered made it to the finals,


    • Canto-Brasileiro
      October 8

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      Ipê is a Brazilian tree that flourishes during Spring.
      Of course all my entries made the finals, I do write very good haiku after all, in different languages
      But I was fair, made almost all my entries JFTJOI and one I removed from the contest

      • Yemassee gold member
        October 8
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        Who removes poems from contests? That's just crazy!


  • Peteskid gold member
    September 30

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    as flores que parecem a belas borboletas de ouro...

    this is simply beautiful, I remember the wood as the strongest of any, so heavy it cannot float, impervious to insects and weather for such a long time. i would build anything i could from this amazing tree. Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck in the judging,

    bem-vindos aos finais...PK

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