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Get-Out !



  I remember it ! Like yesterday , you starin in my face , " UR WRONG WORDS " made me look like an idiot the way it was . Had me jabberin some stupid shit, makin a BiG DEAL outta nothin  like it was important . & ihad tha floor , iwas tha only one standinin tha room that day . iShoulda made my move , bt that was before iRealized you like every situation to qo your way . Well every word that comes outta this mouth is eitha MY way or NO way . So pack ur baqs & qet out ! . i'll be tha first person 2 volunteer & push you out that door w| ur sleezy slimball words of shit & ur WHORE of a chick !  So qet out !  yeah !  They want me to keep comin 2 skoo , bt see , imma juss let em think ima do that , cuz iGot BiGGER & BETTER thanqs awaitin for meh . & iaint qonna let one look from you scare meh away from doin what ive always wanted to do out here in L. A !  See ive hadd ppl lauqhin in my face & disrespect m to the hiqhest link . iBeen throuqh a hell of a lot tho , specially when my twin sister passed away . So you see , dnt come at me lyk you kno meh , cuz i'll have a hella of a lott to say 2 someone who tries to tawk crap  , lyk they kno what im abt . iGot Hoes, bitches , wiqqers & niqqers sayin shit , bt they kan keep on tawkin , if they dnt say it to my face ! 
  So here iam , back at strike one : Sitten in that room w| you & that bitchh , iwas tryin to play it cool , iwill admitt . Bt all iWanted was for you too stand for me , for you to be there when ineeded a lil advice fix . Bt its YOUR fault idnt want shit to do w| ur ass anymore anyway . So why am iReqretin my share of it ?????????
  So GET OUT ! you dnt qot shit on me NOMORE !
GET OUT ! trustin you was a Mistake , a Misdormeaner waitin to happen . Shit isaid to you in tha past , is DEAD ! History is GONE !
  juss like you are to me from this day forward & on !  Hey !
        ......................................icould qo ahead & say a lil more  , a lil mkore abt what you & itawked abt  , icould expose a few thinqs ikno abt you . idnt think that'll be rite 2 do you like that . Bt what the hell , you did me like that .
  & before iEnd this sonq , let me juss say , for all you wannabe , hard trustin teenaqe women out der , you think you kno who he is . & what hes all abt , well juss  listen . So did I . iThouqht iknew everythinq abt him  , iLooked up to him  , i adored him . Then one dayy ,....he made it loud & clear ,......he was NEVER really who  ithouqht he was , he was ,....the carry out quy , The Hostess Kinq . Suqar & spice , everythinq nice except for tha quilt in between for us FEMALES who have trust issues w| men .  & im beqqin you 2 stop the pain Plz . So qive it up !
  Sit back & let me show you what thinqs are really abt now .
                                    Yeah !

Author notes

This sonq is really a Rap iwrote . Based on my otha sonq , UR WRONG WORDS . iHope yall lyk it ! Komments Needed !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thnxs ! Luv yu quys !

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  • In.Your.Arms
    October 7
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    Woah. I love it.


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    October 3

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    WOW! That was powerful....

    My way or NO WAY

    with no inbetween

    slaughters a man or a woman
    in two
    and removes his/her every
    passionate dream!

    Thankyou for sharing!
    THis took some real
    GUTS to write!

    well done!
    well done!

    ears/Kathleen/Seattle

    this was a wonderful lesson
    especially at the age of 17?
    lucky you....
    you've just learned the importance
    of genuine honesty...many fear
    it....you were thrust into it...

    how we define our unspoken
    loyalties..that require to be spoken...
    lest..we find ourselves upon
    the thrones of ....tic tic BOOM!

    Helluva Write!
    way to write!
    ears