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I don't know who I'm supposed to be

I think I need help.
So many people, so many wants...

This person wants a lawyer out of me,
That person wants wants someone that can take care of them when they're old
Another person wants everything
The other people just side with everyone else.

To many people want something from me,
And I can't think about my life when their are so many wants.
How am I supposed to think when everyone relies on me
To become something special.
Its like I'm stuck at the fork in the road...
Don't know which way is right,
But I can't stay in the middle for much longer.
My time is coming closer and I need to decide.

I don't know who I'm supposed to be,
I just know
I need to figure it out, NOW!

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  • Grey.Area.
    November 18
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    This is really good. I can see you're age and your uncertainty here.

    Like this part, I can imagine it:
    To become something special.
    Its like I'm stuck at the fork in the road...
    Don't know which way is right,
    But I can't stay in the middle for much longer.

    Good job.

  • fighter022
    October 24

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    yh i know wat tht feels like. i hate to not help people but some times i need a lil time to help myself but can never get it. so i know full well wat its like too feel like that. an amazing poem tht tells the truth about a lot of people and how they feel.


  • The.poet.of.hearts
    October 16

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    yupz, some times we get what we do not understand, we get twists and marks.. which burns ur gradually.. and we forget what we lost.. o we get wonderful write

    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words


  • Poison Blood
    September 30

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    I can definately relate to this. Just be who you want to be without fear of judgement. Let others love you for who you are now and let them respect who you want to be in the future. Do not fear loss, because you will soon find out who to keep close and who to keep away. I hope this helps.


  • Fallen-Thumper
    September 30

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    ok, one step back and breathe for a minute, everyone has wants its just saying no to them, its hard because i cant do it and its a weakness of mine but turn around and tell them to back off, its what you need at the moment. time for you!
    a really great poem, relatable and says a lot, great job.
    -penguin-

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