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Season of Change


Tomorrow starts October
Autumn is in the air
Soon colored leaves
Will fall everywhere

We are moving back home
To where I got my start
Just like the autumn season
A new beginning fills my heart

Another chapter in our life
Is about to unfold
The best is yet to come
As we create memories of gold

This is the last move
For my husband and me
In our little house
We can finally feel free

Turning over a new leaf
For a life brand new
I thank God for what
He has helped us to do

Author notes

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Contest prompt: 97 words
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  • penman gold member
    November 3
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    Excellent

    oh my what a great and loving write. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 11

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    this is beautiful!
    i love to read about families and
    life, and years the one holds together
    with their sweeties,

    thank you so, love and blessings

    Rend


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 7

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    Aww yes how wonderful hun
    To be starting a new, those seasons , the love of yourself and your wonderful Daniel
    Hug*
    I love the sincere feelings
    Thank you always

    Julie


  • doolie gold member
    October 2

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    Wow, this is absolutely lovely sis. Such a beautiful and heartfelt write. The rhyme and flow is flawless as always. Great job...Best of luck in the contest.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 1

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    excellent~

    This reads so beautiful
    Are you really moving from Louisville sis?
    I have my heat as of last night my feet wuz freezing lol...........
    Love this and the imagery as well
    Best of luck in the contest
    I just posted a new one too
    Drop by when ya can
    Hugs
    Your sis
    Susan~~~


  • Rose Angel gold member
    September 30

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    A heartfelt rhyming write of such sentiment, and yearnings for a last move for two who have such to look forward to....The warmth of this penning has a charm all it's own...I wish you well in the contest, sis..


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    September 30

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    Brilliant take on the prompt
    The flow and rhyme is so smooth
    Charming piece that leaves the reader with a big
    I wish you all the best in your future endeavors
    Wish you the best in the contest
    Much love my friend

    David


  • maralisa silver member
    September 30

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    aw sis a beautiful write I love the last stanza it says it all about life good luck inthe contest sis


  • TheQueenOfPoetry
    September 30

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    Wonderful job:

    Yes, it's good to thank God for everything we have. I loved this poem. I looked at the preview of it and knew it would be good. I loved the picture also. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes to you on your move.

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