few have seen me stumble
few have seen me cry
but those that have seen these things
hardly know the reason why
What did you think
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this is a relatable situation that you got a hold on perfectly


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Oh my God! are you sure you didn't write that about me? That sounds exactly like me!


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i think that this has feeling
this poem really shows how you feel like how poeple that see you fall miss with you but could care less about why you fell.

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wow
short but it says so much. well done. i loved it! -
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thanks ^__^
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i agree with this. its so emotional.....


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thank you for all the comments.
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