rain descends upon the earth
my tears blend in
but it still hurts
he will not see another sunrise
my lover...
my lose...
the key to who i am
i cannot do this alone
why did he leave me?
i can't contain my feelings
why did he leave?
he didn't have to die!
he didn't have to save me!!
why did he jump in front of me...?
the bullet should have not hit him.
it should have hit me
how could i have been so stupid!?
this is not how it's meant to be...
What did you think
Comments
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O.O amazing truly amazing...you are a very powerful writer


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Ooo, I know what you mean! Again, sounds just like m life ha.


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This was very emotional and very well written. i enjoyed reading this piece. It was moving. Thanks so much for the read and keep up the really good work.!
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this is great! I loved this! its really really emotional ....... hopefully things will get better for you





