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true beauty, true happiness.

Stepping into the sunshine,
This day is bright, this day is fine.
The cool crisp air signifing the last day of September
Fall, an old friend from before I can remember.

Surrounded by beauty,
An opposite feeling of yesterday,
I want to be forever this happy,
Out in the green grass is where I lay.

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  • Tqop
    September 30

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    Yes as summer passes us by, to Fall we say: Hi. Great job on this.


    • vixann
      September 30
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      I love how even comment is a poem. Thank you very much


  • theycallmedilly
    September 30

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    Beautiful
    Very well written, I like it


    • vixann
      September 30
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      Thank you very much, I'm glad you like it.