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(I Miss) You

I miss you.

Word that seem simple are
Often the hardest
To say to the cruel, cold
World.
Where have you gone?
You are alone,
I know
I can sense it in my alabaster
Bones.
Tears stream down
My face.
I know not why or how
You have cruelly
Abandoned
She who loved you more then
All others.
I speak empty words
To the air filled with
Ghosts (of you).
Can you hear my
Heart calling?
Can you feel my
Death rattle?

I miss you.

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  • Injury
    October 5
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    This was AMAZINGGGGGGGGGG

    I miss you. These words hold more power than any I've ever heard. Love it. Thank you for entering
    -INJURY