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Sweet autumn clematis

fall through earth -

star-blooms of spring.



 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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http://chiotsrun.com/2009/09/20/sweet-autumn-clematis/

mine is in bloom right now, it is so beautiful..

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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    November 8
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    beautiful ku


  • myrataal silver member
    October 4

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    Your poetry ...

    turns life to essence -- always. Simply and purely divine.

    Love
    Myra


  • Namita
    October 2

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    aww this is so pretty! i love such little ones!


  • Peteskid gold member
    October 2

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    ahh...the sweet clematis, i like the thoughts here, quite a beautiful and unusual flower, vining through summer to bloom in fall, to add a sweet fragrance to the air-
    flowing bunches of flowers, as i read i had a thought of a scene- the fowers and the moon, very nicely done. Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck in the judging...PK




  • Allyce May gold member
    October 1

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    This is gorgeous! Both you and Nicolette are changing my mind about Haikus; then, you just have a way with words I firmly believe you can't write without beauty pouring from your pen, metaphorically speaking.

    Beautiful like you!


  • Nicolette gold member
    October 1

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    flowers are the earth's stars - and here you've penned them wonderfully, tara!!

    ~ Nicolette


  • gaze
    October 1

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  • celadia
    October 1
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    I liked this little haiku, good luck in contest.


  • Cup-a-Joe
    October 1

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    I didn't know what a clematis was, untill now. So this taught me that your words are not only beautiful, but also informative.
    Very nice work.

    Joe


  • sweet arrival gold member
    September 30

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    clematis is gorgeous... as is this poem. did i miss haiku I ? i better go look.


  • Pure Thought silver member
    September 30

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    Love the brief beauty in this; and it will last forever.
    Well done.


  • Jersene gold member
    September 30

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    cool! I love clematis...didn't know they had one that blooms in September.

    beautiful haiku, Tara


  • arafura gold member
    September 30
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    Bravo!


  • Nom de Plume
    September 30

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    you pollinate these pages with the bloom of your words..


  • elemental angel
    September 30

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    as is your Haiku
    Bravo


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    September 30

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    i love how toy tossed in a bit of spring in there, i do, i have never heard of this kind of plant but i have seen it around Chicago sometimes, keep it flowing.


  • motel silver member
    September 30

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    wonderful image of the flower.
    once again, good luck in the contest.

  • LovingPhoenix
    September 30
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    The words are as beautiful as the flower!


  • thepoetssoul
    September 30

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    Love my haiku, think I like yours even better
    Wonderfully vivid, smile brightly

    Tony

  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    September 30
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    sweet string of words


  • NurseChilly gold member
    September 30

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    you're getting pretty good at these lady... damn, you're good
    the seasonal aspect mixed with emotional bonding.. well done


  • chloris
    September 30
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    these are so wonderful and vivid.

  • Rowan gold member
    September 30

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    Stunning. sigh. I have an autumn-colored coral bell that i should really clip down for winter, but I still find it beautiful, even if it's dried.

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