jack-o-lantern
a toothless child
mimics his grin
Author notes
thoughts of autumn
fun ku
A contest entry
- Spring into Autumn haiku by Peteskid.
1400 points, ended October 6, 53 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
your suggestions are always welcomed
Comments
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Very good indeed.
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Thank you mairi
mal
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Fun indeed and a perfect image!
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thank you mari... and seeing you are a lover of these little wonders as I am... I would love to get your opinion on some of the many haiku and senryu ive written since joining this site... http://allpoetry.com/list/by/malabu my list up to a few months ago
I have many more on my pages not in the list
Mal
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HA! Now THAT'S a wonderful comparison. So cute and how absolutely fitting. Plus... all that candy... probably a few more teeth lost!
Congratulations on your much deserved award.
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thanks alot ten...i had fun writing this one too..
mal
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Vivid and wonderful.
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Thanks sweetie
care for some pumkin pie?
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You're blushing?
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lol! yea you're writing more lately..i love this haiku...halloween isn't even here yet...and october is in a day...but wow..you already makes me want to run to the pumpkin patch..love it
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I was thinking about making that 1500 lb pumpkin a pumpkin house jack o lantern...
read about it in the paper the other day damn it was humongus
thanks sweetie
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ha-ha...Very well done, a good haiku structure and the lines arranged to let the reader find the chuckle, an image captured here with skill and humor, an unfortunately rare combination, very well done. Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck in the judging; welcome to the finals...PK
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yes deep down im a funny guy... I loved writing this one...and from the amount of fine entries you've recieved I gather you will be biting your figer nails too..
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yes, very gratifying to see so many writers interested in haiku, a very enthusiastic turnout here...Nice...Thanks...PK
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halloween
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