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Another Day

stars are fading with new light

no match for our bright Sun

gone again until the night

another day has just begun

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  • debilynn gold member
    September 30

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    i love what you have written... but where's the rest? it's not like you to leave one hanging
    . dig your talent OUT AND GET BUSY! I REALLY MISS HEARING from you!!!keep writing ! God bless you always.


  • williamstown silver member
    September 30

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    So beautiful, but where`s the rest? Its like proffering a delicious box of chocolates and then withdrawing it before I have had a chance to sample


    • paullallady silver member
      September 30
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      This has been my problem this last year or so, I only get a stanza and then it flits away. I am glad you enjoyed this and I will try and see if my muse, who seems to have left without leaving a forwarding address, could possibly spare another stanza or two! thanks!