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Breathtaking

Amongst the sand dunes
There is a lonely river -
It is breathtaking.

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I love haiku!

A contest entry

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  • Swan song gold member
    October 10

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    I like where you went with this and that last line breathtakin for some reason I can feel that. Well done


  • Tqop
    September 30

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    I love to close my eyes and picture this! Wonderful job.


  • Phoenix Rising
    September 29
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    this is good
    good luck in the contest