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What I See

 

What I see is a picture which could be the Jubilee

the end of creation when Jesus comes to take

God's children home.

 

The sky is  aflame with stars lighting the Heavens

their nearness bringing the snow and ice from the

mountains tops.

 

The great boulders crumbling under the force of the

flowing waters, rivulets cut in the stone as they

were in the Great Flood.

 

The North Star shines brightly to mark the way

the sky is lit behind the mountains

flames reaching toward Heaven

 

The day we look forward to yet we fear it

because we then will face the judgment

and reap what we have sown.

 

Author notes

Picture Credit: Marc Adamus, Great Beyond

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  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 9

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    Appreciate your reflections of thought here, as to what you see...rather prophetic and dramatic...Your words grab the attention of the readers...Most stunning write..Bravo!


    • Wickedruby1 gold member
      November 18
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      She Was Less

      Thanks for reading and replying on she Was Less


    • Wickedruby1 gold member
      November 18
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      What I See

      It was an unusual prmpt picture but the reading I got from it was truely what I wrote.


    • Wickedruby1 gold member
      November 9
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      What I See

      Thanks for the review on this poem it was a prompt


  • racheliscoolr
    October 26

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    Brilliant

    The day we look forward to yet we fear it...As I read this line, I think about how there are alot of things in a lifetime that we both look forward to and fear at the same time...getting married for one. I really like this poem, I can't wait to read your other poetry.


  • NickRhyme silver member
    October 24
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    Nicely written. A beautiful poem to suite a beautiful picture. Great description of your thoughts of the image. Great work.

  • This was lovely but I did catch a couple of spelling errors if you don't mind my perfectionism

    L4: "aflame" should be one word instead of two
    L15: "sewn" should be "sown"

    I almost corrected "judgment" until I realized that the way you spelled it is in fact the modern-day American spelling. I'm the oddball who still spells it "judgement" stateside

  • Lil Rebel Kami
    October 1

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    WOW OUTSTANDING IN TRUTHS!

    This was AWESOME SIS, I loved it and loved the ending as well as it was like the icing on the cake so to speak.You have a wonderful way with words here in this one.I loved it!Great title for this one as well! I look forward to reading more of yours soon.We love you much, Kami

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