foggy day, my mind wants to play
bushes clog my brain, makes me insane
muggy water sloshing like a tidal wave
will any brain cells be left or any to save
cancer has it's way to move right in
slithers in the night like a basket of sin
throws nasty germs all over the place
your mind and the big c starts a race
who will win this mirrored lake effect
you can't see what you want for it's wrecked
shadows haunting me when I look at life
I want sunshine and I have given strife
is it enough to battle this clogged brain
when it insist on being muddled, dirty rain
a lake of mirrors that show what it's really like
the big c playing a number on my psych
In a list
A contest entry
- Liar Mirror 8 for 8 Liar Mirror by AngelBellerose.
700 points, ended September 30, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
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Yowzzers!
I would be willing to bet this one is from my poetic Neice, but will not know for sure until the contest is over. I love this entry and thanks to "Whoever" entered it!
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the most unique take on this subject. I enjoyed your perspective. Congratulations on your previous gold trophy!!
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great job! liked this. very strong. i love the backround and picture to.
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Hey sweetie...this is a really brave strong write....you have such talent...and you use it to paint beauty everywhere thats quite a gift to give to your friends
nice write....keep shining...someone very beautiful on the inside and very wise...once told me that some people have a speciaal light inside them...that it shone out so that those around them could see that they had a beautiful soul...ou are such a person...and its a pleasure to read your work
Thankyou
T
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love the way you penned you heart
deep with in this write you took the message
and brought forth something splendid
deep felt with much imagery well penned
thank you for penning for me hugs Angel♥
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Its been very long since ive read someone who has written rhyme with good metre.
The emotional attachment this brings to ones mind, is very significant. And that is what I look for in a poem. I guess thats why I fell in love with this peice. Bravo!
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You tackled this prompt pretty well. This was such a nice written piece...but kind of sad and lost at the same time. Best of luck to you in the contest.
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So sad
to read of your experience!
You write of your pain brilliantly & with a clarity that shows a heart 
that's being refined. That you can express yourself in this way is a blessing to us all. 
for being so brave as to share your journey with us. Dear one, we are all dieing from the time we take our first breath. Some of us are given shorter life spans than others. All is in His plan. This world system doesn't have much more time before the return of The King of the Universe. This is what I endeavor to think of when my mortality & frail health rear up before me. I know totally what you mean by the big c playing a number on your psych! 
It's a constant battle with the 
The Christ has won the victory, now we must be strong while we wait for Him. 
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well this was sad but brilliant i hate you having the big c i wish i could just zap it away and make you all good again im sure God heres my prays on that and will do the right thing , anyway the poem is well crafted clever and brilliant from your heart and mind so well done darling im very proud to say SAM I AM my Daughter
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