a spring crocus
indomitable
as that new wall
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A contest entry
- Spring into Autumn haiku by Peteskid.
1400 points, ended October 6, 53 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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what a haikuan smilie i love dthis al thew ay ,,,and the in depth emnaing that it sought to convey.Why the twoof us cant seem to exchange notes.I never seem to find you near my page as wel...just kidding. I ahve many enw ones. -
Effects of global warming in haiku? Genius as ever
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I'll have what you're drinking, Jem.
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Carte Noir - not allowed me single malt until I am off the pain killers
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Yeah. Yellow, like the sandstone.
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mhm
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I rather like this one
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I wanna grow up and do haiku like you
C
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I wanna grow up and write haiku like me too.
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I have no intention of ever growing up, so the writing haiku doesn't come into it
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We noticed.
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ahhh... the frosty and sudden snappish weather of spring, and this little flower that rises early, like an harbinger; resilient strength is a special thing. Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck in the judging...PK
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Another piece of 3am cr*p that wouldn't stay quiet. To my own mind, in many ways this is the better of the two, with the contrast of soft and hard images brought together as a balance - yin/yang, if you wish. The surprise of the observer's connection of the two - the reader almost saying, "Huh? What new wall?"...
But I don't have to explain that to you - you got it, right?
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I got it
, btw i do some of my best bad poetry at 3 am must be something in the air... or lack thereof...anyway, thank you for joining in the fun...'skid
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I do all my best bad poetry in the hours when I should be in bed, the fussy critical mind goes off to bed leaving the raw elemental part to its own devices.
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I am trying to get my head round the concepts of "cricketjeff" and "raw elemental".
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Now that is just terrifying
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Innit just!
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