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Binary Butchers

Bones are crushed to dust by churning gears,
skin tugged from the muscle by the teeth of serrated cogs.
Rust and blood mixes in coagulating clumps,
screams echo among the squeals of screeching metal.

Iron hooks placed behind joints spread limbs,
greedy android fingers fish for organs with needle digits.
Emotionless automatons harvest fresh meat,
mechanic cleavers chop in rhythmic lines.

Cattle are pushed into the meat grinder
and ground into links.

Steak, loin, jerky, brain.

The gluttonous stomach of society rots away
as the last vestiges of animal life dies,
and computers programmed to serve
find fresh cuts and livers in the bellies of their masters.

They pack the dusty supermarkets with sealed product,
scouting for the clusters of humanity hiding from robots.

Machines just following their binary programming,
their faulty script and fried Microsoft chips.

Besides,
there are hungry mouths to feed.

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  • James Holdaway
    November 19

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    The end justifies the means

    Tough, but that is how it is.A very descriptive peice and well written.


  • Cannibal Col
    November 17

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    AWE!!!!!

    You are amazing! Kudos to your talent and subject matter, flawless, awestriking.


  • Jarret F
    November 1

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    "greedy android fingers fish for organs with needle digits."

    I liked this line a lot. The greediness of the "androids" is actually coming from the people programing them, and you play off that nicely.

    Good poem


  • sinfull
    September 30

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    Now this would make an interesting plot line...devilish poetics in here and redmoon is right, your skills are blooming awesome. I'm not much in to the blood and gore (call me pollyanna) I make an exception for you. Keep writing. =)

    • Miss Macabre silver member
      September 30

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      Thank you very much! And thanks for reading, and enjoying my work. ^.^


  • redmoonnrizing silver member
    September 30

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    Wow! I am loving your play on words. I really can't say enough about your poetic growth. You just keep amazing me

    Great imagery in these lines

    Bones are crushed to dust by churning gears,
    skin tugged from the muscle by the teeth of serrated cogs.
    Rust and blood mixes in coagulating clumps,
    screams echo among the squeals of screeching metal.


    • Miss Macabre silver member
      September 30
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      Thank you. ^.^ I think it's one of the best I've written, I'll be pinning it to my author's page.

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