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Silence

The aquisition of contrivance
Words that speak themselves.
The idea is preposterous.

But she still finds a way
To manifest her feelings
Even without a voice.

Most look the other way
But I pause and reflect
Her silence is my muse.

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  • Heroesrox
    October 2
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    Final grading rubric.

    Spacing 4/10
    Content 6/10
    wording 8/10
    overall wow 6/10

    total 24/40