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autumn's anguish

It’s all a state of mind
I’m merely a state of mind
I was right all those years ago
Rainclouds are signs of my future
When she walked into the room, she was wearing his jacket
I want to wear yours
Haven’t talked to u in 2 days
Miss our lighthearted conversations
Gave him a hug
I was thinking of you
This pencil cannot balance on my wrist forever
Like an oddly shaped watch
Speeding up time with each stroke of lead
I’m wearing my heart of my sleeve,
But it acts like a faded logo
Stenciled in long ago when people actually cared
When u actually cared
It’s all over now
Happiness and luck are wisps of smoke
Lost in autumn’s storms of broken love.
We all wear ourselves down with reality,
& even when we laugh, out sorrow shines thru,
A whisper igniting the night,
the faint glow of a lighthouse softly penetrating the darkness.
Do we want to be happy?
Love always ends in hatred.
Never fall in love, I mouthed to the world.
It only consumes your life & destroys you,
As a fire licks up a child in an instant, along with his teddy bear
Never fall in love, I whisper in your ear as u unconsciously murder me slowly
Death will conquer tonight,
As all life speaks together,
Like an unending riot, they scream at me,
To never fall in love
Again.

Author notes

sorry if the font colours dont rlly match the atmosphere,
i was in a neon mood :/

rough draft i wrote in math, sorry if it sucks.

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Comments

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  • Clarabelll
    October 4, 2009
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    i dont get it...


  • eronrox
    October 2, 2009

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    wowwwwww, this is legit goood
    like i really liked in until the end ish,

    We all wear ourselves down with reality,
    & even when we laugh, out sorrow shines thru,
    A whisper igniting the night,
    the faint glow of a lighthouse softly penetrating the darkness.
    Do we want to be happy?
    Love always ends in hatred.
    Never fall in love, I mouthed to the world.
    It only consumes your life & destroys you,

    and then the whole never fall in love i didn't like after that aha,
    its good
    i was thinking
    i might start writing again,
    lets chill sooon kid.

    • Iris Doyle
      October 19, 2009
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      ive never been very good at ending poems have i? aha


    • Iris Doyle
      October 2, 2009
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      aww erin, this is like the first positive comment uve given me in a while.
      u made my day, love :] thnxx.

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