Blustering winds engulf me.
The crashing waves against stone so beautiful.
An evening sunset with colors so divine.
Below a face remained, etched into the sand.
A gentle touch which burns like wildfire.
Eyes as blue as the ocean sparkle like stars.
Your laughs are priceless, your words are my memories.
Below a face remained, etched into the sand.
Time stands still whenever you glance my way.
A once racing heart now stills itself.
You might be gone, but my heart's forever yours.
Below a face remained, forever etched into the sand.
Author notes
I honestly don't know wat this was about. lol. 
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nice
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thank you!
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I dont know what its about either :L but wow whatever it is it works i tell you
A truly beautiful piece
Good luck and thankyou for entering
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thanks! glad you liked it!
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You say you dont know what this was about. I feel like it was written for a lost love or the loss of someone very important to you. I can 100% relate to that. This was well written. Thank you for your entry.
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thanks! glad you liked it!
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beautiful megan.
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aww thanks sis!
glad you liked it!
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One word:
Uncliche`. It may not be a word, nor do I care at the moment; it is the utter truth. It was a beautiful piece. The only thing I can say is that the repeated lines seem...accidental, in a way. Kind of weird that it only reoccurs twice out of three times, but hey; to each their own, eh?
Lovely, dear, and wonderful choices of similies.
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lol thank you! I'm glad that you liked it! I was bored during I believe it was my history class and started writing it.
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