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Tales Of A Broken Heart

This disease is going to kill me
And this wind keeps blowing my life's debris
Like everything I've ever bought because I thought it would change my train of thought
But it seems my soul is not worth the fight I've already fought
Keep your faith in me, maybe I'll survive
Yet, I don't think there's any hope in me coming out of this alive
The doctors said there's no cure
And they feel sorry for the pain I'll have to endure
But this ache wont seem to go away
Now all I have to do is sit and wait to decay
But that's what I get for giving someone my heart
And trusting them not to break it apart










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  • Nativepridegirl711
    November 23
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    That's really deep and I like how you put the words I didn't know what it was supose to be at first then I read the rest so now I can see how it turns out really good!

  • i really like this. i can relate. it sucks too. but awesome poem


  • In.Your.Arms
    October 7
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    Wicked good! i love the neon green (; its pretty much just an intense poem. ilove it!

  • SharonLee
    September 29
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    I feel that way sometimes. I like the poem.